Friday, October 23, 2015

Ultimate Avenger: Into the Sun


Ultimate Avenger

Smoke poured out of the broken wreckage of skyscrapers. Thousands of Chitauri littered the blackened streets of Detroit. Above the embattled city a giant world-ship floated, Chitauri sky-chariots streaming from it's hangars. The mad Titan Thanos gazed down upon Earth, below him he beheld a circle of tiny specks, the Avengers, this planet's pitiful guardians. All the might of his armies was concentrated on them. Soon the only beings capable of stopping him would be slain.

Thanos settled back in his floating throne and flexed his arm. There was nothing so satisfying as conquering a planet, watching millions of life-forms plead for mercy. . .and then destroying them. A lowly slave approached him, not daring to look upon him. She presented him with his golden Infinity Gauntlet. Thanos slipped it on, admiring the Green stone gleaming in it's center. He had not used this in a while. Thanos decided he should test it, no good going into battle with a faulty weapon. He turned to the slave and smiled. "Run". She only got halfway to the observation deck door before a green beam of energy melted her. The gauntlet still worked.

On the streets of Detroit the battle for Earth raged. Captain Steve Rogers caught a dozen laser blasts on his shield and threw a grenade into a squad of Chitauri. A block away The Vision's forehead shone as his Mind Gem took control of a huge floating space wyrm. The wyrm turned and plowed through a squadron of sky chariots. Hawkeye leaped from rooftop to rooftop, pelting the alien invaders with arrows. Thor landed beside Captain America and blasted a chariot out of the air with a streak of lightning. The Asgardian was grinning. "It has been to long since I fought such a glorious battle." Steve glanced around and saw a dozen civilians lying dead outside a mall. "The longer this battle lasts the more people will die. These things just keep coming, just like New York." Thor lost his smile and threw his hammer, knocking a space wyrm into a building. Iron Man landed behind them. "We need to take down that world-ship. We do that and every one of these aliens will go kaput." Steve looked up at the vast starship casting a shadow over the city. "O.K. Barton, Romanov, Scarlet and me will hold down the fort while Thor, Hulk, The vision and you fly up and get that ship into space. If it gets destroyed here half the city will go with it.

Thanos glanced down through the observation room force field and noticed the little heroes blasting through the atmosphere towards him. They had finally deduced that this ship was the key to his conquest. In a way he was pleased. They would almost be a good challenge.

Thor arrived first. His mighty hammer carried him through the force field and onto a balcony. A few yards away Thanos floated in his chair. Thor fired lighting at him. The green gem glittered and a lightning rod appeared between them, channeling the bolt into the world-ship. Thanos smiled. Tendrils of energy whipped out of the gauntlet, swirled around Thor's defenses and stabbed at him with piercing blades. Iron Man rocketed into the room and fired bursts of power from his palms. Thanos was hurled out of his chair. Now he was annoyed. A gleaming green T'Mirak crystal raced across the room and latched onto Thor's chest-plate, burning with unbearable heat. Iron man raised his arms for fire again but green tendrils slammed him into the wall, holding his arms in place and tearing apart his armor. Thor tore at the slippery crystal and toppled off of the balcony into space.

Vision had taken a little longer to get to the ship because he was giving the Hulk a boost. He flew into the room and took in the scene at a glance. He tossed Hulk at Thanos and caught a battered Anthony Stark as the tendrils released him. Hulk lashed out, catching Thanos by surprise. The Titan slammed through a wall, but was ready for the follow up punch. He caught the Hulk's fist and held it there, seemingly without effort. Hulk kicked at him. Thanos sidestepped it and kicked the beast's other leg out from under it. He had memorized several hundred pressure points for every type of humanoid species. As Hulk leaped back to his feet Thanos threw his first punch of the battle, right under The Hulk's chin. The green beast's head snapped back and Dr. Bruce Banner sailed through several walls and out into orbit.

Back on the ground the Avengers regrouped in a warehouse. Steve leaned against a crate and shook his head. Clint Barton and Romanov were busy helping the National Guard to hold a perimeter. Thor lay propped up against a forklift, burn marks all over his chest, his beard burned away. Tony Stark tried to rise and sank back with a cry. Scarlet Witch was using her telekinetic power to hold shut his stab wounds and stitch them shut. The Vision flew into the warehouse, holding the sleeping form of Bruce Banner in his arms. He told Steve about the being they had fought in the ship. Steve tried to think, although the laser burn on his leg made it tough. They had to stop the aliens, but more would always come from the ship. They had to destroy the ship, but a being in the ship had stopped them. So, they had to destroy the being.

As Steve shared his thoughts with the remains of his team Stark raised his hand. Steve knelt, removing the Billionaire's oxygen mask so that he could speak. "I've got a crazy plan." Steve looked around at the others. "Right now I would try anything."

Thanos flew across the room and sat back in his chair. The invasion of Earth was going well. He decided to send some space wyrms over to the country named Japan. Shake up Asia a bit. Several laser batteries fired up and spewed streams of energy into the sky, shooting down the missiles that the earthling army had been sending up all day. Even if any got through they would not penetrate the energy shield surrounding the world-ship. He noticed another figure flying up straight towards him. Another hero come to challenge the invincible Thanos. He signaled the laser turrets to leave it alone and sat back in his chair to wait.

Thor's hammer Mjnolnir hit his chair, shattering it into a thousand splinters. Thanos smashed through the ceiling, and another, and another. His head felt rather sore after blasting through all 300 stories of the world-ship and into orbit. Thanos turned to observe his new attacker. Before him hovered a suit of powered armor, forged of a gold-titanium alloy. The armored figure held in one hand the hammer Mjnolnir, in the other hand the vibranium shield of Captain America.

The Iron Man helmet opened. The calm purple eyes of The Vision gazed back at him. He looked about to say something. No doubt some appeal to his humanity or reason, thought Thanos. He had no time for this. The tendrils of green energy streaked from the gem towards Vision. The android fired his suit's thrusters and whirled aside. Vision tried to find an opening. But Thanos surrounded himself with a whirling mist of green. Vision darted forwards, but but the mist swirled towards him and he pulled back. Thanos was playing a cautious game, analyzing his enemy's abilities. Vision pulled away as if retreating, then raced forwards, sheltered by his shield, and smashed through the net of energy. Thanos turned to recieve a blow from Mjnolir that made his head ring and hurtled him out into space. The Titan stopped his tumbling, just in time to receive another blow from the hammer. Vision hit him again and again. Thanos lashed out with his gem, forming a huge hammer sweeping through space. Vision took the blow on his shield and struck Thanos again. He reeled, somersaulting through space before the moon stopped his fall. Thanos rose to his feet. He had never lost a fight, and he never would. He formed a wall of green energy between himself and Vision. The android struck it with his hammer, to no effect. Thanos began to recover confidence. Vision could not pierce his defense. Soon he would find this challenger's weakness and destroy him. Then he noticed that his world-ship was no longer hovering above Earth.

Captain Steve Rogers gazed through the porthole as the world-ship blasted past Venus. He wore one of Stark's suits of armor to protect him from the cold of space. Falcon had flown him up to the world-ship while Thanos was busy. It had taken Steve a few minutes to take out the Chitauri guards on the bridge. The navigation system was very strange, but J.A.R.V.I.S. had talked him through it. Now the world-ship was on a new heading, straight into the sun. Steve sighed, he would miss his friends back on Earth, but he HAD insisted on carrying out this plan himself. A dozen Chitauri warriors came clattering down a hallway towards the bridge. Steve was ready for them.

Thanos saw in an instant how he had been deceived. He made his decision, dropping the unbreakable wall and racing after the world-ship. Vision followed him, blasting at the Titan with his mind gem. Thanos focused all his power on speed and slowly began to pull away. Vision threw Mjolnir. Thanos felt it coming and barely dodged it. Vision was still losing the race. He was too bulky. The android launched every missile in the armored suit at Thanos. The space around him was filled with a ripple of explosions. Thanos lost control again and tumbled off course.
Steve kicked the last Chitauri warrior into the wall and turned back to the porthole. The sun now filled his view, a unimaginably gigantic yellow orb. Dozens of warnings flashed on the alien control panel. Steve looked away, studying some strange markings on the wall. This was the part about being a soldier he liked least.

Thanos had lost the race to the world-ship. Vision floated between him and the receding spacecraft. Thanos reactivated his energy wall, keeping it between himself and Vision as he circled around towards his ship."Do you think losing that ship will hurt me?" He taunted the implacable android. "I will return with more Chitauri, or simply conquer your planet alone. You can do nothing against my power." No reply. Thanos got between Vision and the ship. Now he backed towards his prize. Vision closed the helmet over his face, but then noticed a warning. Steve Rogers was in the world-ship. If he did not act Steve would die. Thanos felt the enormous gravity of the Sun tugging at him. He shifted away. To bad about the world-ship, but it was replaceable.

Vision struck, slamming into the energy wall. Thanos watched calmly as he hammered the wall with Mjolnir and his mind stone. Vision drew back to plan. The world-ship was gleaming red now, shaking apart under the strain of gravity. Vision forced himself to focus, focus all his power on one square inch of the energy wall.  He blasted it with all he had, his hammer, his mind stone and the arc reactor on his chest. And the energy wall broke. Thanos did not have time to cringe before Vision streaked forwards and kicked him into the Sun.

Vision flew towards the disintegrating world-ship, he pierced the shattered hull and plunged to the bridge. The glare and heat were terrible. Steve lay on the floor, sliding towards the view-port in the grip of the Sun's gravity. His armor was flaking away in charred embers. Vision grabbed him and boosted away. The world-ship peeled away around him, plunging into the sun. Vision strained, the boosters on his suit failed. He was held in place by gravity, unable to retreat an inch from the rippling ball of gas that was cooking Steve to a turn. Vision felt his strength ebbing, slowly he slid backwards, away from Earth. The blue planet was just a speck now, another point of light in the enormity of space. The Vision looked down at Captain America, who he held tucked under one arm. Any moment now the armor that stood between his comrade and space would chip off and Steve would die.
Vision slid back another centimeter and looked away from the searing sun. There on his wrist hung Mjnolnir. He threw the hammer away and lurched forwards a few feet. Again he threw it, and again. Steve must have regained consciousness because his boosters came on. Faster and faster the two Avengers pulled away. And then they were streaking away, carving through space towards Earth. Three minutes before they landed Steve Roger's suit fell apart, blowing away like leaves in the autumn. On the ground Hawkeye and Thor rushed over to see the Captain. Steve blinked and coughed on some ashes. "I guess I'm gonna have a pretty good tan." He said. Thor thwacked Vision on the back. "Truly, you are a mighty warrior. Can I have my hammer back?" Everyone smiled in spite of themselves. Wade Wilson, the Falcon and the recovering Dr. Banner joined the group. The Avengers were again united and the Earth was free.

Thanos floated in the center of the Sun. His mighty eyes watered in the heat of the plasma exploding all around him. His stomach cramped in the gravity. If he had required air to breath it would have burned in his lungs. He would not die, but could not bear to live in this burning maelstrom of pain. The green stone in his fist glowed, brighter than bright and slowly, ever so slowly, an inch at a time, Thanos began to move, out of the heart of the Sun



Thanks for reading my story. It's just a first draft. Please comment below and tell me how I did. 

35 comments:

  1. Cool! I think it is funny how you mentioned the civilians I haven't seen the movies but it is said that you never actually see any of them dead! Extra realism there.

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    1. Thanks for commenting! There is actually a really funny video on Youtube by Peter Hollens and studio C about the Marvel Movies. it's a musical. I'm glad you liked my story.

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    2. Yeah, I have seen it already actually, I really like Studio C. Have you seen their Kyle videos? BTW, I have somewhat limited time that I have to balance between blogging and gaming so I only read about a half of your post, but I plan on reading the rest in increments.

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    3. I haven't seen the Kyle video's yet. I'll have to check them out. Take all the time you want to read and be sure to tell me what you think of the ending.
      P.S. What kind of games do you play? And have you ever heard of Warframe?

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    4. I haven't seen the Kyle video's yet. I'll have to check them out. Take all the time you want to read and be sure to tell me what you think of the ending.
      P.S. What kind of games do you play? And have you ever heard of Warframe?

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    5. Sorry for not replying a bit sooner, I wasn't checking the follow-up emails. Yeah, there pretty funny, thanks for understanding about the reading-in-parts bit. I mostly play WW2 stuff, like some flight sims a few FPS and I used to play World of Tanks, all I play right now though is War Thunder, I made a quick review of it on my blog. I like it alot, multi-player can be frustrating but not as much as WoT, either because I'm blessed with good skills or I'm just calmer than I was then, ha ha. I have heard of it, I think, is it sci-fi or fantasy?

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    6. I read the rest of it, it's good! Is it a short story or an excerpt?

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    7. Oh yeah, and the ending I must say, for the sake of constructive criticism was a bit cliche and sort of downplays the Avenger's efforts "all this and we still didn't kill him" sort of thing, but just because it is cliche doesn't mean it's bad or anything. Just wanted to give my opinion since you asked. Also is this based after one of the movies (in terms of exactly what happened, not overall circumstances) or did you make it up? The Avengers sharing weapons and flying into the sun is really good if you made it up. I like creative concepts like that, which I find hard to come up with when I'm making a story.

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    8. Thanks for all the feedback. Could you paste the link to your blog in a comment? I want to check it out but am having a hard time finding it. My dad actually plays War Thunder. He also plays another older WW2 game called Medal of Honor Allied Assault. I tried WOT once and it was very frustrating. I like War Thunder much better. Warframe is a sci-fi game. It is really cool and completely free on Steam. You get to play as a space ninja.
      This was a short story, fan fiction. One day I just thought, what if Thanos came along and the Avengers could not defeat him, so they combined all their tech to make a Ultimate Avenger. I actually made up the entire plot as I went, so it is rather generic and cliche. I particularly should have had Thanos attacking something other than a major city with something other than the Chitauri.
      Do you like to write stories then?
      P.S. thanks for the constructive criticism.

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    9. Sure, http://cap-ranger.blogspot.com/ I have actually played MOHAA I can't though now because the windows 7 I was playing it on kicked the bucket! ha ha. Yeah, WoT is a VERY frustrating game, I enjoy WT so much more and it has other advantages to it, such as greater realism. I have a review of it, so you can check it out on my blog when you do (even though you already play). I'll check out Warframe too. That's cool you made up your own story, your welcome for the criticism, I don't want to put people down, but I know writers definitely value criticism. I haven't written a whole lot, but I do it a little bit, I definitely like the principles of storywriting and stuff like that. One was a post-apoc story that never really got off the ground (but it is still on the back burner if I want to try progressing it) another was a Battle of Britain story which was good, but I havent written anymore of it. My best thing would be a WW2 OSS type story which is actually based after MOHAA. It is pretty good, though I haven't worked on it in awhile, but maybe I will post some of it sometime. Also, there is this one story writing blog I follow, maybe you have heard of it, it's really good so here is the link if you want to check it out: http://thestorymonger.com/

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    10. I checked out Warframe, I don't play M rated games, so it wouldn't work for me, but thanks for recommending it. BTW, have you ever used a military style (L shaped) flashlight? I just got a surplus one today for 5 dollars, they are VERY cool, the bottom compartment has different colored lenses you can change and there is a pressure switch option.

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    11. conversation Hijack xD
      Hi I'm Daniel a fellow blogger and warframe enthusiast and ima just say that trust me warframe does not deserve an "M" rating at all the only reason it has a an "M" rating is because of an option in game that allows massive amounts of blood gore and dismemberment so its "M" rating is optional xD ( I play it with that disabled myself) anyway watch some gameplay see if its your style and give it a whirl :)
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      how bright are those flashlights?

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    12. It can be turned off? Yeah, that makes a big difference. Pretty bright, The beam is more "focused" so it is not the best for say, lighting up a room, but it does that quite sufficiently. It is pretty effective for ground-to-air signalling, the pressure switch is valuable because it allows you to flash repeatedly. I bought it for Civil Air Patrol for my search and rescue (SAR) gear. I havent written about that yet, but I plan on talking about CAP on my blog pretty soon. I have been in for maybe 4 months or so, and loving it.

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  2. sweet I actually need a flashlight just like that Do you know the model? and I'd love to see a post on CAP i've considered it myself but I went for the CHP Explorers program instead but now I am open to the idea again mainly because the no longer have room for me at my post :( and yeah the gore is totally optional but it is enabled by default and sometimes turns back on after an update.

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    1. Yeah CAP is great, the military aspect is really cool, I really like how all the cadets are friends yet authority and respect for rank is maintained at the same time. I'm a Cadet Airman, but I recently completed all requirements for Cadet Airman first class. I still have to do a promo board, but that should be simple. The flashlight says TL-122 on the side, I assume that is it's model designation. Thanks for the Warframe info, I'm going to check it out again, since I didnt' look very far past the rating, ha ha. Do you know of other games where content can be turned off? There are so many cool games out there but I can't play any of 'em because every single one is so violent!

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    2. My CHP post had a very military aspect as well and I loved it so CAP is looking better all the time.
      What does CAP involve in terms of expenses?
      As far as Warframe goes unfortunately this is one of the very few instances where I have come across an option like that but if you could tell me the game genre you are interested in and what kina spec's your pc has I could probably recommend a few (I've played just about every F2P game there is xD :P)

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    3. And thanks for the flashlight Model#

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    4. And thanks for the flashlight Model#

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    5. My CHP post had a very military aspect as well and I loved it so CAP is looking better all the time.
      What does CAP involve in terms of expenses?
      As far as Warframe goes unfortunately this is one of the very few instances where I have come across an option like that but if you could tell me the game genre you are interested in and what kina spec's your pc has I could probably recommend a few (I've played just about every F2P game there is xD :P)

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    6. And when I say "military" I mostly mean WW2 or modern warfare type things. Do you have a blog? I'd like to see the link so I can check it out.

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    7. Not currently but I will have one again soon.
      This is actually my Bro's blog so I'll get him to announce when its up.
      Ill get back to u shortly on Games
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      do you want to spend money or are u a F2P only

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    8. oh, okay thanks. Yeah, actually I would prefer any games that you can just buy as disk, versus having to download it. thanks for helping me.

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    9. Well You have to DL this game but it is definitely worth it a pretty much the most none violent FPS game I've aver played and besides that its just a blast to play
      http://www.hirezstudios.com/tribesascend/home

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    10. For a physics/Epic diving sim game look up Beam.ng I havnt got it but I play the game that it started as(Which is free) "Rigs of Rods" Beam.ng is just more polished version of it but its on sale for $20 as of right now

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    11. PS I believe Beam.NG comes as a DVD or DL

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  3. Space engineers = Physics/survival/sandbox

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    1. I have not looked at your suggestions yet, but I'll get to them, it just might take me awhile, thanks. Thanks for commenting at my blog too and following.

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    2. NP and I hope you find one you like
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      There's also a game called GRAV which I have no experience with but I really wanna try it oh! and an f2p game called heroes and generals which might be right up your ally but I don't play it anymore. LOL I got a little carried away anyhow good luck xD

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    3. Okay, thanks, I heard of Heroes and Generals, is there blood? I thought there was. Are you looking forward to the new Star Wars movie? I am!

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    4. I don't remember any so if there was it was probably far from excessive.
      and I sure am I'm gonna see if I can make a kylo ren costume b4 to wear for the release.

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    5. I finally checked your suggestions out, most of them didn't interest me too much (not to decry your efforts though, I appreciate you giving suggestions) I liked Beam Ng though, it looks fun and pretty cool, I might check that out sometime. Merry Christmas!

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    6. YW and Merry Christmas to you

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    7. You too, and Happy New Year! (sorry for not replying sooner, I don't check my social email too often be cause it is usually just telling me I published a comment)

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    8. Hey Daniel, I asked your brother if he would be available to play War Thunder, but can't due to his job, but he said you might be able to. My schedule is usually pretty open, but it has to be in the afternoon. I figure we can try some serious coordinated tactics and I have some ideas for interesting 1v1 custom battle "challenges". My username is vigilant_Hunter.

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    9. Hey! sorry I didn't get back to you but I must have missed this notification :p. But I would definitely love to play you on "War thunder" Which I dont have right now but I'm DL'ing asap. so see you on the battlefield
      PS i'm not on allot but im sure we could coordinate and setup a time to fight Idk were you are but im in the Pacific time zone email me at oldwornoutbook@live.com or add me on fb(Daniel Loyd) or steam(theHeadShotninja) if you have them. ttyl

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